Sinner – The Hunt (Part 3)

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Wolf by Nici Bueckert

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The others were already up. Tinker fed some more wood onto the fire, his rune staff at his side.  Kara held one of her axes in her lap. She looked nervous.

“What is it?” asked Sinner, as he rubbed the residual sleep from his eyes.

Rayn looked up from where he had started stringing his bow. “I don’t know, but there’s more than one, and they have Wolf on edge.” He indicated the wolf prowling the edge of the light cast by the fire. A low growl emanating from his throat.

Suddenly, a series of spine chilling wails arose from all directions around their tiny camp. Sinner’s heart thumped in his chest. He fumbled for his staff, clutching it tightly as he rolled into a crouch, putting his back to the fire. 

The wailing continued and intensified. An unnatural sense of dread threatened to take hold of Sinner. His eyes searched wildly into the dark to discover the threat.

Rayn, to his left, had nocked an arrow and was doing likewise. Kara, to his right, brandished her axes, Wolf bristling at her side.

Just as abruptly as the wailing began, it stopped. The sudden silence was eerie.

 “I’m sorry, young ones.” Sinner spun around to see Tinker sitting calmly with his staff in his hand. The runes on the staff were glowing faintly. “We have been hunted. That was the wail of shadow beasts. I was wrong to think that we might be safe in the mountains.”

Sinner, heart still racing and drenched in sweat, looked at Tinker.

“Whatever happens, you must reach the other side of the mountains. It is your only hope now. Do not return to Sinland,” said Tinker, in a low voice. “I will join you if I can.”

Rayn relaxed the draw on his bow but still kept the arrow nocked. “What do you mean you will join us…”

“We have a visitor,” Tinker interrupted.

A tall, lean figure materialized out of the darkness.  He wore a hooded cloak and carried a spear in his right hand. The spear had an intricate series of runes carved into its shaft, but unlike the smooth, flowing runes on Tinker’s staff, these runes were harsh and jagged.

All the companions prepared to fight, except for Tinker who continued to sit still.

Slowly, the intruder lowered his spear to the ground, arose, and flipped back the hood of his cloak. Black dreadlocks spilled out.

Sinner recoiled. He had expected a man. What he saw was a monster. His face wasn’t right. No nose, only two slits. The creature smiled. Or, at least what Sinner took for a smile. He displayed a mouthful of pointed teeth that made him look every bit the predator. His skin was a lifeless, pasty white. His fingers curled into what looked more like claws than hands.

 Rayn gave Tinker an uncertain glance and drew back on his bow.

The creature spoke. “That would be unwise, young one. Would you attack an unarmed guest? Surely, your elder taught you better manners, yes? ”

“Who or what are you?” asked Rayn. “What do you know of the beasts that cry all around us?”

The creature took a step forward. “Ah, I am no man, tis true. Your elder knows who I am. I’m surprised he hasn’t told you. Then again, I wonder what other secrets he keeps from you. Do you even realize who it is that guides you?”

Rayn glanced uncertainly at Tinker.

Tinker gave Rayn a pained expression before turning his eyes to the creature. “I know what you are, creature of death. You will not find us easy prey.”

The creature opened his arms in a wide gesture. “These young ones know nothing. Is that how you train them these days? They know not what they have stumbled upon.” He turned to Sinner and gave him an appraising look.

The creature’s eyes held Sinner’s gaze. Sinner broke out in a cold sweat looking into those black, depthless eyes. He involuntarily thought of the orbs tied to his side. His thoughts became jumbled and confused. He tore his eyes away. Immediately, his mental state improved.

The creature smiled again as if understanding something. He looked at Tinker. “What a failure you are, old man. The darkness is already in your midst. It is a shame the hunt is over. I expected more from you. Pity really. That one had promise, didn’t he.”

Darkness in their midst? Was he talking about me, Sinner thought.

The creature turned and looked at Rayn and Kara with the same look with which he had appraised Sinner.

Rayn didn’t flinch.

Kara raised her axes in a warning gesture. “You are a vile and evil creature. I will not be taken by your lies.”

The creature took another step forward. “Yes, the woodsman’s girl you are. It seems your uncle trained you somewhat better than the old man did his boys. Nevertheless, he’s not here, is he? Have you not wondered why he stayed behind at the village? What his role is in all of this. It must be maddening trying to fit the pieces together. You might not like what you see when it all fits together.” The creature’s eyes narrowed.

Kara faltered. Her axes lowered slightly.

“Enough!” Tinker stood and gestured toward the creature with his staff. The creature took a step back.  “Be gone, foul denizen of evil. The young ones may surprise you before this is over. I will defend them with my life.”

“It will cost you nothing less,” said the creature, with a wicked grin. “Perhaps, they don’t all want saving. Have you thought about that, old man?” The creature looked at Sinner again as he backed away. He was now back where he had laid his spear down.

Sinner gripped his staff with both hands. If he so much as reaches for his spear.

But the creature made no such move. “Many know me as the black death. But know this: I am the Huntsman. You should know that before you die.”

With that the Huntsman’s spear leaped from the ground into his claw-like hand and he vanished into the darkness beyond the fire. It all happened so fast. The Huntsman was gone.  Then the wailing resumed.

To be continued…

© Peter Wiebe 2013

About Peter Wiebe

.My name is Peter Wiebe. I am a husband and father of 4 boys-the oldest of which has gone ahead of us to Heaven after a courageous battle with cancer at the age of 10. As the name of this blog implies, I desire to write stories about heroes. Jesse loved hero stories, and I would love nothing more than to write stories that I think he would want to read. Hero stories , whether real or fictional, can inspire us to live more nobly in our own daily lives. Plus, I am personally grieved at how many heroes in books and film today are portrayed as many different shades of gray-no moral compass. I am not advocating heroes without flaws, but heroes who recognize their flaws and acknowledge and work on overcoming them. I think of the great Bible heroes like David, Sampson, and Joshua just to name a few. I think also of the Hero of heroes, who indeed has no flaws. Jesus is the ultimate inspiration for us all. The best qualities of any hero always point to Him. Peter Wiebe 2013
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8 Responses to Sinner – The Hunt (Part 3)

  1. angels2send says:

    my eyes are a bit better, thought i would read this, i´m glad i did. what wonderful writing, i hope you´ll keep on and on. you´ve captured well our foibles and dangers… i´ve been thinking so much lately how the little trinkets of life can become so important, and so dangerous to our relationship with Christ. how easily we are deceived into thinking “i can have this…” i have a longing to get more “organized” in getting God´s opinion on the things i desire… schedule times each month when i discuss the trinkets of my life with Him…again and again. great writing!!

  2. Margaret says:

    Intriguing. I like the image you created of the Huntsman. Reminds me of a number of characters.

  3. You have accurately described how our enemy tries to intimidate us. I am enjoying and relating to this story. I also really appreciate the artwork. Great job on both!

    • Peter Wiebe says:

      Thank you. My niece, Nici, certainly is talented and I’m blessed she’s interested in drawing for this story. I love how you pick up on the subtle things I attempt to include in the story.

      • Please pass along my appreciation to your niece – she is a fine artist.

        I believe that God has blessed you with a special ability to paint word pictures of the spiritual through your writings (and hopefully has blessed me with the eyes to see).

      • Peter Wiebe says:

        Thanks, Andy. I am blessed to have connected with you. Your encouragement is valuable to me, my friend.

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